One on One tutorial

This was how my line up stood ay my crit today. I think i work really hard in a week to produce almost four outfits. I planned to have the sequin top with the linen trousers and that be my second outfit but alison thinks i should split them up and add in more exciting pieces. We spoke about the collection and feel it is siting somewhere middle of the road. Its not simple enough to be minimilist and its not big enough to be a bold collection so i need to decide which way i want to take it and move on in that direction. I took with my new line up which looks like this:

At first i was really happy with it i definately think it evoked the sense of sophistication and market level i am going for. But talking to alison she said similar to looking at my clothes my line up is in between to its safe. and i dont want to be safe i think i want to push it bolder. I believe i can do it and i am drawn to the first and last outfits which are bolder and i think they look like they work well. I think i need to go back to my research again and sit and work it out dont just work from what ive made and my head look at my research again. What do i want to be remembered for. We looked at central st martins and as i went through each collection i could use one word to describe wat it was and thats what i need to do with mine. I need to define it. Alison also said about maybe introuducing a colour again. Likei had looked at an acid green early on but im still unsure i reall ylike it as muted tones i think it keeps it a tasteful and sophisticated level i think bright colours will take in a completly different direction although if i did introude a colour i am thinking tangerine.